By Ally (Year 9)
It was supposed to be a normal day, but when everything was getting too easy, the challenge was just beginning.
I walked on the street to go to the shops and going to buy a new water bottle. Because the sunshine was too bright, I didn’t notice a light source in front of me after it asked, “Which ways to the shops?” it panted. And it shocked me. I calmed myself down and showed it where the shops by pointing. It said, “Thanks” and flew away. And that’s when I felt something wrong is going to happen.


Hi Ally I liked your story. I especially liked the ending because it ended suspensefully. You should come check out my story on my eighth grade blog: https://kidblog.org/class/mrs-harts-8th-grade-class1920/posts/dqen2fbmdvb2hfnb52xqdo4k1
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